XTREEMMAK's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Redemption Denied - part2]

Congrats

On an excellent film there sir! I think the only improvement that I could possible suggest is just character art, but that's not at all in the least terrible in itself. The other thing though (and I'm not sure if it's just me), but there's a sound issue in the beginning.

Anyway, great job sir!

[Waterman (3D)]

Not bad

Still needs work though. It was a little slow in timing and your walking animation for the water guy didn't quite connect to the table though was nicely done. If you look close, it looks like his feet are floating a bit on some steps thanks to the shadows. I think the lighting could have also been improved a bit as it felt a little dark. The animation wasn't as stiff I've seen some animators, but it still needs to come off as more fluid instead of a key frame edit here and there. I know you dont have access to MoCap so I'll go easy on that one lol. The rendering though with the exception of the arm was pretty well done imo.

Overall, keep up the good work. You'll get there sonny boy :)

[It's a Sign!]

HAHA

Nice! I laughed and smiled the entire way through. I thought it could have been longer though :)

[Sketchy Friends Dance]

Heh heh

Creepy, but nice lol. Reminds me of Dumbo and the Pink Elephants.

TheBoogley responds:

HEY! You're the second person to say that, so I guess it must be true! :D

[Badass Dora!]

lol

OMG LONGER PLEASE!!!

[DBZ stuff..]

lmao

Wow Cell says "Ohh Shit" in the uncut version? SERIOUSLY?! lmao

[Sundays]

Hey Dude!

Hey Dude!
You did ya thang! The only reason I gave you an 8 was that some parts of the animation were a bit jittery (not like the characters but just the timing on some where a bit too stagnant and could have been smoother). Some of the characters could have also benefited from some shadow shading as well like the water dragon unless it was meant to give that dichotomy of realism vs fantasy. IDK I just thought it would help. Other than that, the piece was spot on beautiful! Keep up the great work!

Ohh and,
If you ever have a piece that requires a voice actor, be sure to drop me a line. You can check out my samples on my profile.

Take Care!

[Roller Coaster Junkie]

Pure Win

No doubt you did your thing! Animation was like water, the colors shading and lighting were beautiful, the song was fun and matched perfectly, and every part of the story board was executed to perfection! Well done!